4.04.2019

Unperfect Verse


I am only
a list
of disappointments
crumpled
into a mean ball
tossed in a Main Street
wastecan
not even worth
trying to recycle


#NaPoWriMo Day 4!
For Sherry’s prompt in the Garden: BEAUTIFUL
and Skylover’s Word List: UNPERFECT

11 comments:

  1. Some people must feel this way. And some poems never see the light of day. Yet in those crumpled lines, and hurting hearts, may be some shining gems we've overlooked. Thanks for your response to my prompt, Marian.

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  2. Oh, but I seem to discern a hopefulness behind your words. :)

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  3. Nonsense. You are front page news.

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  4. Certainly not! But I sometimes feel this way too, so I gotcha.

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  5. Absolutely not! You are awesome!❤️

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  6. I used to feel this way but not anymore. I hurt for those who still feel like this.

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  7. You use of metaphor here is perfect! Bravo!!

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  8. Martin Creed would have seen meaning in each of your wrinkles, Mary, and would have made you feel different about your value. ❤

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  9. Certainly one can feel that way. Well expresed! K.

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