Aroma of dewberry
(retired)
precedes your entrance
& should be accompanied
by sax solo
Resort to defacing
glossy chick-magazine
spreads
with ink moustaches
and horns
Against all logic
gonna need another hit
of Café Bustelo
to swallow down
this desire
#NaPoWriMo Day 12!
For Fireblossom Friday in the Garden: LOVE
and Skylover’s Word List: DEFACED
N.B. All love & respect to extraordinary Shay, always! xo
I love how the title knits itself into the lines of the poem. This made me sigh and laugh a little bit too.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful melody! Love never sounded so sweet. I love the euphemisms and the "aroma of dewberry".
ReplyDeleteAs I remarked on FB, I love this! Been there, got the tee shirt, drew the mustaches!
ReplyDeleteAnd I thought I was the only one who drew the horns and mustaches on the pictures. Yeppers. I got the gold colored plastic award on this one.
ReplyDeleteI love everything about this from title to closing line.
ReplyDeleteNot sure, Marian, if I'd play that babe or not. With the distractions I'd be afraid there would be some stray notes
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I can hear the sax...
ReplyDeleteSounds like a very cool customer
ReplyDeleteLoved the feel and the setting.
ReplyDeleteHaha! Maybe it will take more than that! Well done. k.
ReplyDeleteCoffee and a marker...some crushes go that way
ReplyDeleteSo much goes on, so unsuspected.
ReplyDeleteThat’s a brilliant title, Marian, and I love the combination of aroma of dewberry and sax solo. The ink moustaches and horns raised a giggle!
ReplyDeleteSappho griped like this. That friggen Eros, shot in the keister again. Plinking those ivories in golden saunter.
ReplyDeleteI can see this unfold Marian.
ReplyDelete... a sax solo (ha)
ReplyDeleteI can hear that sax and smell that Bustello!
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