4.03.2019

Practicing Scales


Drenched
I imagine
it’s because
night music
washed over me
while dreaming
of broken chords


#NaPoWriMo Day 3!
For Sanaa’s prompt in the Garden: LATE NIGHT MUSE
and Skylover Word List: MUSIC

14 comments:

  1. This is incredibly eloquent, Marian!❤️ I can feel the heart of this poem humming along to the music of night. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!

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  2. Short and wonderful. While dreaming of broken chords....very nice

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  3. Beautiful. I love the double-meaning in "scales." I fancy you a mermaid at night.

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  4. Ooh, that's yummy, gives me a sweet frisson.

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  5. Drenched: That word captures so many things! The feeling is rendered so well. :-)

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  6. Such power in so few words. Lovely!

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  7. I can see your rainy song strummed on a washboard. Liking it
    ..

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  8. A melancholy song?... drenched I took for tears - music and poetry are obviously closely linked.

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  9. This is stunning, Marian. I've known those tears.

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!