9.07.2018

Avoi-dance


One
with
quiet
three over
under-emphasis
on urgent-gravitational
case for revolution against
        silent-misery


For Toni's prompt in the Garden: STEP INTO THE VOID

6 comments:

  1. this seems like a weird dance, indeed (but in a good way for the word working/play) - I love the title and feeling this Fib poem evokes, a semi-hesitant, semaphore telling of story that is both a spiral in and out ...

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  2. You made those words really work, kiddo. I am all for a revolution against misery.

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  3. Really love how you build it up... whatever we can to do avoid the trap of self-misery.

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  4. The Fibs seem go be popular these days! I like this dance to avoid misery. Thank you for posting!

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  5. Self misery is a monster... I try to avoid it at all costs

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  6. Self misery is indeed a monster - I refuse to give him a home.
    Anna :o]

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