4.02.2018

Second Sight

I’d like to see you
in the first light
in the last light
in the dim light
pretending
washed in sunlight

We can try to
turn back the hour hand
turn back this month’s page
turn into someone else’s
driveway
sit in the back seat

Let’s try to make it
all go away
make it magnificent
make it to Friday
make it to second base
if we can make it home

So much I want to
see you brand new
want to see you as though
even with all we know
I know that I’d choose
old you in the new-now

Day two! For Karin’s April SECOND prompt in the Imaginary Garden.
Posted by Marian at 6:16 AM
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17 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorApril 2, 2018 at 6:42 AM

    Wonderful, Marian. I want to make it to Friday too, and believe life can still be brand new.

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 2, 2018 at 7:08 AM

    Just gorgeous. And so full of love.

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  3. Sanaa RizviApril 2, 2018 at 9:08 AM

    This is beautiful!šŸ’œ We long to embrace every side of the person we love (both the old and new) as we set forth to embark upon a new dawn.šŸ’œ

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  4. FireblossomApril 2, 2018 at 9:26 AM

    ~sigh~ I have felt just like that, before.

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyApril 2, 2018 at 10:10 AM

    Beautiful. And you are a lucky girl!

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  6. L C FolksApril 2, 2018 at 10:34 AM

    I enjoyed this so much; love moving, growing, changing, remaining, I moved through all of this as I read your words,,

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  7. Gillena CoxApril 2, 2018 at 10:55 AM

    Luv the call to "make it to Friday". In for a long haul in the relationship. Great perspective

    much love...

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  8. Neeraj KhankaApril 2, 2018 at 11:51 AM

    Lovely write ! Especially the closing lines :
    "I know that I’d choose
    old you in the new-now"
    - Wonderful.

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  9. Mama ZenApril 2, 2018 at 12:09 PM

    This is just perfect, Marian. Wish I'd written this.

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  10. annellApril 2, 2018 at 12:21 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poem, Second Sight!

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  11. AnonymousApril 2, 2018 at 12:31 PM

    needs more than a second reading to appreciate your superb poem
    "turn into someone else’s
    driveway
    sit in the back seat"

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  12. Toni SpencerApril 2, 2018 at 2:03 PM

    I know this feeling so well. A second reading brings to light even more than the first.

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  13. AnonymousApril 2, 2018 at 5:13 PM

    pretending
    washed in sunlight

    - just reading down, just feeling the beat of the pace of the words, and it's so much like a scream (mine) in absolute joy and frustration for the longing (but in all good ways, mine I mean) - so layered in its simplicity - an onion. Holy smokes, an onion (that's a compliment, by the way - at least, that's my intention)

    I'm just washing myself in the sheer power of this.

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  14. Susie ClevengerApril 2, 2018 at 10:51 PM

    Everybody's workin for the weekend... A yearning for time, place, person...I feel it.

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  15. JimApril 3, 2018 at 4:22 AM

    Do-overs, be silly for a day but at the end, don't worry, I'll be rhe same I'd you still are. A fun read, Marian, here and on FB.
    ..

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  16. OutlawyerApril 3, 2018 at 7:07 AM

    Hey Marian— I came by yesterday but realize none of my comments on blogspot took. So glad I came back. It’s just a wonderful poem, thanks. K.

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  17. Paul John DearApril 4, 2018 at 9:11 AM

    Wow....old you in the new-now....killer line to close a stunning poem.

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