5.28.2017

Living Room

Bare walls,
straight chairs--
the only color
in this room
is his black piano

Kim asked the Real Toads to write about a place through a person or a person through a place: PEOPLE AND PLACES
Posted by Marian at 1:48 PM
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11 comments:

  1. ❁May 28, 2017 at 1:51 PM

    I love this. Excellent piece.

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  2. Gillena CoxMay 28, 2017 at 2:24 PM

    Stark, luv it

    much love...

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  3. Kim M. RussellMay 28, 2017 at 2:34 PM

    Stark, to the point and stunning, Marian!

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  4. FireblossomMay 28, 2017 at 3:32 PM

    The anti-Elton?

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  5. brudbergMay 28, 2017 at 3:36 PM

    I think I can see the piano player...

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  6. Isadora GruyeMay 28, 2017 at 5:08 PM

    Small on word count, big on feels! Love it.

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  7. Kerry O'ConnorMay 29, 2017 at 2:10 AM

    Amazing contrast. This should be placed on an easel and displayed in a gallery.

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  8. SreejaMay 29, 2017 at 8:38 AM

    Vivid and deep image!

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  9. JimMay 29, 2017 at 12:32 PM

    An easy place to put the reader in, you wrote it well. I had imagined solitary consignment except for the luxury, if the victim played, of the black piano.
    ..

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  10. AnonymousMay 29, 2017 at 3:53 PM

    Ebonies and anuses.

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  11. AnonymousMay 29, 2017 at 8:57 PM

    so much expressed in so few words

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