4.27.2017

Ernie Was Right to Wait Up for This

Uncomfort
-able not knowing
    when but cer-
         tain (as can
         be)  the moment
will come
when          the other shoe
dramatic
  -ally       drops

Photo by Marian Kent

NaPoWriMo Day 27! For the Real Toads: WRITING SHOES

14 comments:

  1. Such a cool layout to this shadorma! And the sense of it made me laugh.
    (Also, someone in this photo has her/his shoes on the right feet...)

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  2. Oh goodness, I know that feeling. I try my best to not give it too much room to walk it through my mind.

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  3. My goodness this is good!!❤️ I love the shape you have given to the shadorma!❤️

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  4. This is cleverly written and laid out. Nicely done.

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  5. I love that "ally drops." Awesome enjambment here.

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  6. A horrible thought to be thinking, Marian. Should he wish for it to come quickly or hope it never will and have to live a life wondering if and when?
    ..

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    1. Oh, it will come without a doubt.

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  7. Wonderful title adds to the point and the fun.

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  8. dramatically, ecstatically nearly ~

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  9. Love the drama in the waiting for the shoe to drop...

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