4.27.2017

Ernie Was Right to Wait Up for This

Uncomfort
-able not knowing
    when but cer-
         tain (as can
         be)  the moment
will come
when          the other shoe
dramatic
  -ally       drops

Photo by Marian Kent

NaPoWriMo Day 27! For the Real Toads: WRITING SHOES
Posted by Marian at 1:34 PM
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14 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorApril 27, 2017 at 2:26 PM

    Such a cool layout to this shadorma! And the sense of it made me laugh.
    (Also, someone in this photo has her/his shoes on the right feet...)

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  2. Susie ClevengerApril 27, 2017 at 3:32 PM

    Oh goodness, I know that feeling. I try my best to not give it too much room to walk it through my mind.

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  3. Kim M. RussellApril 27, 2017 at 3:41 PM

    Love the shape!

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  4. Sanaa RizviApril 27, 2017 at 6:02 PM

    My goodness this is good!!❤️ I love the shape you have given to the shadorma!❤️

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  5. Justin LambApril 27, 2017 at 6:39 PM

    This is cleverly written and laid out. Nicely done.

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  6. AnonymousApril 27, 2017 at 6:45 PM

    ...just like the rest...

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  7. De JacksonApril 27, 2017 at 7:55 PM

    I love that "ally drops." Awesome enjambment here.

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  8. JimApril 27, 2017 at 8:30 PM

    A horrible thought to be thinking, Marian. Should he wish for it to come quickly or hope it never will and have to live a life wondering if and when?
    ..

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  9. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 27, 2017 at 8:32 PM

    Wonderful title adds to the point and the fun.

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  10. grapelingApril 28, 2017 at 1:44 AM

    dramatically, ecstatically nearly ~

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  11. brudbergApril 28, 2017 at 8:03 AM

    Love the drama in the waiting for the shoe to drop...

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