Wind in your mane, insouciantin perfect rhyming symmetryhilariously flippantto your breeze-tossed mane, intransigentearnest description goodly-meantresulting in soliloquyto wind-tangled hair, insouciantin perfect rhyming symmetry
Day Two of Poetry Month! For Karin’s prompt to the Real Toads: STARTING GATE
Very clever, Marian --I have an image of a young girl (or guy) trotting along. Wonderful word play. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteOoooh! Insouciant - what a great word. Such a stylish triolet.
ReplyDeleteOh...perfect...I love the triolet...thank you, for reminding me about that form. :)
ReplyDeleteThe triolet form suits the subject...highlighting the essence of tossing wind.
ReplyDeletein soliloquy to wind-tangled hair... I like that circular reasoning.
ReplyDeleteA most breathtaking triolet Marian :D
ReplyDeleteThis is clever and quite wonderful to read.
ReplyDeleteMy poetry doesn't trot very well. This is such a creative take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteYou lift my spirits. :)
ReplyDeleteWell done. You're off to a great start for the month.
ReplyDeleteI'm liking your mane and the wind interplay here. Probably more than I'm reading but I can relate. BTW, my horse, Minnie had a short, cropped mane, starting with being able to treat a fistula she had developed. After healing Dad didn't want to have it grow out.
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Oh, I really like this! Especially this section:
ReplyDelete"insouciant
in perfect rhyming symmetry
hilariously flippant"
you did FORM in 30/30??!! sheesh. I'm putting away my pen. ~
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