7.30.2015

Who's Eating Grapes

Sat down
to write a poem
called
I Hate That Guy
but a photo
of Johnny Depp
got me
remembering
how he looks
like you
How
your ring jangles
a bit
between knuckles
Oblique teeth
cleft chin
          your
Who was that guy again?


Occasional Real Toads music prompt: IT’S A SHAME ABOUT RAY
Posted by Marian at 4:07 PM
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10 comments:

  1. JimJuly 30, 2015 at 5:05 PM

    You did good with your prompt, Marian.
    We are still moving, no posts until.
    Maybe I will dream one up while I'm sleeping though.
    People say I look like ___ Then when they begin to tell me they 'forget' who it is.
    ..

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 31, 2015 at 12:38 PM

    I am smiling......love this!

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  3. KirJuly 31, 2015 at 3:56 PM

    Inspired, my friend.
    Oh yes. <3

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  4. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 1, 2015 at 7:09 AM

    I like your subtle reference to Gilbert Grape in the title - one of my favourite Depp movies. Perhaps his charm lies in his ordinary beauty.

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  5. LolamouseAugust 1, 2015 at 11:17 AM

    Marian,
    You nailed this one! This is what happens to me when I try to write to this prompt!

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  6. HannahAugust 3, 2015 at 11:37 AM

    Lol!! Yeah...Johnny Depp is a REAL distraction for me, too...

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  7. Brother OllieAugust 5, 2015 at 8:31 AM

    Gilbert? Clever piece. Had me smiling.

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  8. colleenAugust 5, 2015 at 8:50 AM

    Sweet. I love the intrigue of the title and then getting the connection. I love how it's those little things we remember and miss.

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  9. OutlawyerAugust 11, 2015 at 8:05 AM

    Ah sweet. I didn't see that movie still like poem. K.

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  10. grapelingSeptember 9, 2015 at 5:41 PM

    hah!

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