5.22.2015

Crash

snare drum
  tek
  tek
rattling out
  tek
  tek
list of offenses
  tek
  tek
not listening
  tek
  tek
not remembering
  tek
  tek
making you feel
  tek
  tek
you are one of many
  tek
  tek
  CRASH

Christ I’m sorry
  (sad trombone)
  tek
  tek
you are the only one
  CRASH
  rattle
  tek


It’s Fireblossom Friday in the Imaginary Garden.

17 comments:

  1. I don't think this band is going to stay together for many albums! Cool take, Marian. :-)

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  2. Quite an innovative take on the prompt! :D
    Loved it :D
    xoxo

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  3. Bring on the deafening noise! Love the forgetting, the absorbtion into music.
    Well done and fun originality!

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  4. Snare drummer on the wild! Beware! Take cover!
    This was nice, Marian. Something a little different from you.
    ..

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  5. This felt familiar, a music you shouldn't play too often.

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  6. sad trombone... what a perfect line ~

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  7. Love this beat nik mult-sensory poem.

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  8. Whether taken as an apology or a schtick, the final crash truly feels like an end.

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  9. Great jabs in the short list lines here, Marian, and every one hits home.

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  10. Wow...this is impacting, Marian. Really cool approach and relate-able topic.

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