The first day of springis no less dark than dogfighting,no less bright than Venuswith Mars lurking in shadowsjust behind, no less readythan an aborted countdown,no less mundane than garbage nightunder the stars and the fightsand the threes twos ones of it all,because what are waiting for anyway?
3.20.2015
Spring In the Air
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LOVE! I swing back and forth with each image.l enjoy the insistence of "no less" which makes me pause to think. And, yelled YES to the final couplet!
ReplyDeleteWe are having a gloomy entry into spring too, but it is just rain - which the rainforest and all the growing things need. I loved the cool images in your poem.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the dogfighting clouds to totally disappear ~ Am waiting for spring, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteI loved this unique definition of spring.
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