1.02.2015

Daybreak Over Chicopee (original!)

Pink
line
between
    cloudy grey
& hematite grey
    constitutes earthly boundary,
aspirations too other-wordly
            for mortal hearts.
Posted by Marian at 12:17 PM
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 2, 2015 at 1:35 PM

    Almost haiku-like in feel, but has a slightly surreal feel to it that I think a haiku would find difficult to contain. Chicopee has never been so beguiling.

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorJanuary 2, 2015 at 2:49 PM

    I love the way this looks upon the 'page'. Such a sumptuous choice of words.

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  3. LauraFebruary 17, 2015 at 6:12 PM

    I can see it.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 17, 2015 at 9:43 PM

    Very visual — on and off the page. :)

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2015 at 5:22 AM

    What an interesting tag-poem, "fibonacci" -- a construction of itself ending up "too other-worldly/for mortal hearts." Such fine, feral compression.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2015 at 11:36 AM

    It is surreal.. Chicopee has that quality to it. Unlike any other place in MA. well-written.

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  7. brudbergFebruary 19, 2015 at 12:54 AM

    Love the color imagery of the fib.. And how you used the lines to create an additional effect.

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  8. Gillena CoxFebruary 19, 2015 at 1:23 AM

    quite an interesting sharing

    http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2015/02/25.html

    much love...

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  9. Magaly GuerreroFebruary 19, 2015 at 10:19 AM

    Such a dreamy picture of the horizon...

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  10. SusanFebruary 19, 2015 at 11:59 PM

    This works wonderfully, a pause in the turning of time, a yearning.

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