Yesterday’ssummer breeze blows hostile,cycloning around the wishing grovelike a freight train bent on reckoningancient debts,ransacking forests thick with wonderfrom distant daydreaming,charging straight on.
8.25.2014
Hurricane Season
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Hurricanes do hit with a vengeance-- you have captured that feeling of shock at how daydreamed breeze turns to raging. Thanks. K.
ReplyDelete"like a freight train bent on reckoning ancient debts"---this description is packed full of layer upon layer of depth. Gorgeous :-)
ReplyDeletebig surf forecast here on the left coast, as the hurricane notches down to a 3. guards will be busy... ~
ReplyDeletei love the way a breeze grows to a force of nature in your description.
ReplyDeleteI am also so pleased that this form has given you the medium to express so many thoughts in words again.
yes... me, too! thank you, Kerry.
DeleteWind... from a sweet breeze source grows the fierce, the ferocious.
ReplyDeleteI love "wishing grove." That is so striking.
ReplyDeleteI too love "wishing grove." Where I live we are in the hurricane season.
ReplyDeletejust hanging out in my wishing grove
ReplyDeletebattened down against the elements :)