5.03.2014

Chapel Street

The house
is changed
when he’s out:
observant,
besotted,
thrumming
with questions
she never asks.

For Kerry’s prompt to the Real Toads: Vignette
Posted by Marian at 11:15 AM
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11 comments:

  1. For me 'besotted' represents hundreds of words ... awesome vignette, Maid Marian.

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  2. This speaks of a strained relationship between him and her. A woman who holds her peace when a man around usually has due cause. Such an interesting vignette, filled with possibility.

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  3. The very house is thrumming with the questions "she" can't ask. You say a lot in so few words.

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  4. Yes, you convey so much in these few lines...besotted and not daring to ask questions...it paints a vivid picture.....love the house "thrumming".

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  5. Taking the most extreme situation: It's as if the environment accuses her, wants to know, instead of letting her relax. Sounds like a good friend. 'Course, she needs another good friend who can let her stay elsewhere.

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  6. It's those unasked questions that'll bite her in the butt later!

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  7. You leave us wanting to know more ~ Good one Marian ~

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  8. Absolutely...I agree with Grace...intriguing. Love your word choices, Marian.

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  9. I wonder what questions she would ask...love such few words open such avenues of mystery

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  10. on the edge for the rest of the view ~

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