12.22.2013

Untitled Drive

Sun shines through a slush-
speckled windshield, rendering
her heart warmed, wool-wrapped.
Earlier, unraveling
skeins soaked in a frigid rain.

Tanka for Real Toads!
Posted by Marian at 12:32 AM
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7 comments:

  1. SusanDecember 22, 2013 at 12:40 AM

    Drives are great forgetting out, out of the unraveling and out of the rain.

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorDecember 22, 2013 at 3:01 AM

    I always like the way you retain your poetic voice in your tanka - they are very edgy pieces.

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  3. Susie ClevengerDecember 22, 2013 at 3:44 AM

    Seems the drive knitted her heart...beautiful

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  4. UnknownDecember 22, 2013 at 11:09 AM

    love the third line turn here at heart warmed wool wrapped - a great set (also had to look up "skeins"). Poets have the best vocabularies!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 22, 2013 at 1:06 PM

    I especially like the turn between 2 and 3 ~

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  6. cherylDecember 22, 2013 at 2:12 PM

    This is very timely today. I'm warm already...

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  7. MarianDecember 23, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    it's freaky, all this spring rain.

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