Sun shines through a slush-speckled windshield, renderingher heart warmed, wool-wrapped.Earlier, unravelingskeins soaked in a frigid rain.
Tanka for Real Toads!
12.22.2013
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Tanka for Real Toads!
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Drives are great forgetting out, out of the unraveling and out of the rain.
ReplyDeleteI always like the way you retain your poetic voice in your tanka - they are very edgy pieces.
ReplyDeleteSeems the drive knitted her heart...beautiful
ReplyDeletelove the third line turn here at heart warmed wool wrapped - a great set (also had to look up "skeins"). Poets have the best vocabularies!
ReplyDeleteI especially like the turn between 2 and 3 ~
ReplyDeleteThis is very timely today. I'm warm already...
ReplyDeleteit's freaky, all this spring rain.
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