12.19.2013

Summer Street, as Winter Solstice Approaches

Flame-pink sky
framed
by a lane
of pastel cottages:
Why am I wearing black?

16 comments:

  1. you instilled some mystery into the poem... nicely done...

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  2. Why indeed? Perhaps, like me, you once lived in Berkeley, California, where we all stood in the pastel cottages under flaming skies as we faced the bay and said we will always wear black? As far as I can tell, we had no other reason than being theatre artists who shouldn't pick up light backstage.

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  3. I can really sense the difference between the upper and power parts of your poem. Lovely juxtaposition of colours and emotions.

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  4. I like the contrast of colors ~

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  5. Great use of colours. Very vivid image and an interesting question. May be the black is worn to balance the vibrancy of other hues.
    -HA

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  6. I like the mystery as if she just woke from a dream. Great use of color.

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  7. Perhaps the shadows invited you ?

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  8. Get thee to your closet, woman!!!!

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  9. love this mysterious contrast of colors....

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  10. grief, rebellion, self awareness...I don't know. love it!

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  11. Because black is chic! Smiles. Loved the contrast of colors & emotions :)

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  12. black is chic, but also, this is New England, and sometimes all that black gets old and dour. xoxo

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