11.05.2013

Spokes

Pink sky’s medicine wheel,
forecasting taste to steal
the treasure marked by that X
If I could hitch a ride
by hawk-wing, fly beside
astral travelers, tempest
Aimed for that gold-tinged hoop,
the focused gilded loop
of precious foreverness.
 
"Medicine Wheel Clouds" by Em Jollie

  
#5 of 30 Poems In November to benefit Center for New Americans.
Posted by Marian at 12:00 AM
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12 comments:

  1. SusanNovember 5, 2013 at 6:45 AM

    Neat, unique description. I love when poets' perceptions change how I see the world.

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  2. MargaretNovember 5, 2013 at 11:05 AM

    Miraculous!

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  3. MarianNovember 5, 2013 at 3:11 PM

    i think this poem should be dedicated to the memory of Charlie Chesterman, who just passed away far too soon. his songs have been very important to me and are a huge influence on my writing. up to the sky, cowboy!
    http://www.charliechesterman.com/home.html

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    1. MarianNovember 11, 2013 at 9:58 AM

      http://www.charliechesterman.com/funeral.html

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  4. Kerry O'ConnorNovember 11, 2013 at 10:57 AM

    I'd like to hitch a ride by hawk-wing too.

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  5. EllaNovember 11, 2013 at 12:56 PM

    I love it...and I did think of Stephen Hawking when reading it!
    Was this your intent?!

    Wondrous...
    One of my favorite!

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  6. SusanNovember 11, 2013 at 1:11 PM

    I looked him up and I am listening to his music now. I'm ignorant about music, so listen to all suggestions. He has a neat twang and great hands. I couldn't find any lyrics, but it was a joy to hear him play. Recordings give musicians "precious foreverness." Of a sort.

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  7. LauraNovember 11, 2013 at 4:36 PM

    So beautiful!!!

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  8. Kay L. DaviesNovember 11, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    "of precious foreverness" ...so lovely, Marian.
    K

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  9. revelationsNovember 11, 2013 at 7:37 PM

    I will hitch a ride on the hawk wing.. if there is room for one more... :)

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  10. MarianNovember 12, 2013 at 9:40 AM

    yes, let's all fly off!

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