I might need a pickto chink loosewordspinging in my brain.Better yet to chisellovefrom a concrete heart.
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| Joaquin Sorolla, Victor Hugo's House in Passages |
4.14.2013
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Nice marian--those concrete hearts, they're hard to work with but a helluva metaphor-(-I just used that phrase yesterday--great minds, etc.) I like the painting you chose, too. Glad you found Sorolla had something to help chink the words out with. It does get harder as the month goes along.
ReplyDeleteoooooo, that is such a great line - to chisel love from a concrete heart.
ReplyDeleteSherry (as she often does) said what I wanted to say. I love those words.
ReplyDeleteK
Love that last line too ~
ReplyDeleteI love a concrete heart ;D
ReplyDeleteYes, sometimes we need a good chisel~
I too love the line ...to chisel love from a concrete heart. Working your magic Marian through verse. Circumstances have me behind in my goal of 30 poems in 30 days. I will work to catch up!
ReplyDeleteExcellent words and picture match...
ReplyDeleteLove it! Great last line :)
ReplyDeleteand if it were easy to chisel from concrete, if you were assured it would be worth it, I think a lot more of us would pick up the instrument.
ReplyDeletethe words brought more color to the picture.
Every verb you have used in this poem adds to the effectiveness of this metaphor. Such an interesting choice of picture, with words to bring it into context.
ReplyDeleteconcrete hearts are so difficult - cool poem M. - keep 'em coming. 1/2 done.
ReplyDeleteMay my heart never turn to concrete ...
ReplyDeleteSo much emotion in so few words. Each one perfect.
ReplyDeleteWell, beautiful, your "pinging' words :)
ReplyDeleteawww sigh my friends, glad you like this little cutey. :)
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