3.04.2013

view from the parking lot

Pinkest sky
greets weary shoppers:
upturned eyes,
reverent,
supermarket frustrations
instantly released.

8 comments:

  1. This often occurred on the way home from a day of teaching and meetings . . .

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  2. I actually love going to the supermarket..:)
    but I have been known to look up at the sky in the middle of a parking lot and just be glad for the day, for the moment.
    Love the way you write about everyday.

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  3. This is a form I always go back to--short and auto-condensing, almost purifying to write--it strains all those florid adjectives and adverbs out and leaves only the good ones. You use it beautifully here, Marian.

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    1. agree, love it! i put this in shadorma form because you reminded me of it :)

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  4. Like taking a deep breath! Lovely, Marian!

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  5. thank you! the sky in this valley is incredible.

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  6. sweet - I'll remember to look up at the sky next time out.

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