10.22.2012

lives of pigeons

Help me with my dreams--
We painted them on walls
Back in our mattress days,
When no coo seemed auxiliary.
Posted by Marian at 10:16 PM
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8 comments:

  1. oh, yes...those dreams!
    ;D
    The caged bird doth sing
    of many dreams...
    Love this one and all the coo'd thoughts I am having!

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  2. I like those mattress days, specially when its a dark and rainy day ~

    Happy Tuesday ~

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  3. Beautiful! I can hear the cooing. Reminds me of the 80's when my love gave me a pair of doves and we woke to their cooing at daybreak. Sigh.

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  4. I love to see you working this jueju style. "Back in our mattress days".. that is such an amazing way of expressing the idea of the passions of youth.

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  5. I too loved back in our mattress days--lovely job with this form--

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  6. Ah, the mattress days. With all that's been going on as of late, they are very near and dear to C's and my memory hearts.

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  7. mattress days. That is so unique and fun! This jueju has really been a "winner" prompt as I have really enjoyed the poems.

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  8. yeah i'm thinking the rest of this can be tossed out and "mattress days" is where it's at.

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