7.27.2012

night in a heat wave

wettish
& drowsed
lazy fan
marks time
drifting
to you
sponging
the miry air
& slicing
thru lamina
pricklish
gnawing
a slow lilt
of my hips
for your
kiss
Posted by Marian at 8:01 PM
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10 comments:

  1. Sigh..it almost makes a humid night worth it ...a slow lilt of my hips..such beautiful imagery my friend. Xoxo

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  3. Leave it to you to make a sticky, humid night sexy as hell.

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  4. i like the decscription of movement with the kiss. very sensual.

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  5. lazy fan
    marks time
    drifting
    to you
    sponging
    the miry air

    Yes it does! and so I suspect the rest is true too. Neat!

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  6. You give just enough words to your reader to create an impression of heat, without and within, and leave plenty of space for us to fill in the blanks.

    Excellent work.

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  7. Humid kisses sound so sweet,
    eden

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