5.24.2012

instructions for burning

Take the thing inside your heart,
the flicker that keeps you, add
a catalyst, and detonate. Feel
it burn, licking, conflagration
finally engulfing like cremation.
Tend the ashes and give it time.
A year later, see that blister?
If it bleeds, you're still alive.

29 comments:

  1. WOWZERS, kiddo! This one is SMOKIN'!!! Just so good!

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  2. Excellent use of terminology taken to the metaphoric level.

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  3. Visceral and lyrical. Love it.

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  4. I love every word of this.

    Reminds me of a quote from "Fried Green Tomatoes":

    "A heart can be broken, but it still keeps beating just the same.

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  5. Perfect! Visual and sensory. Excellent.

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  6. Damn. That just knocked me on my ass.

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  7. Well, that was a punch in the gut. In the best way.

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  8. Never heard the whole cycle expressed better, Marian.

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  9. Still alive is the main thing :) Fabulous, concise. Powerful.

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  10. I agree with the above. This moved me. Are you a veteran?

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    1. i am not a veteran.
      thanks so much for coming by, glad you liked it.

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  11. It bleeds, I am alive.

    Thanks for this. Really. Wish I could explain more why, but thanks!

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  12. Marian, this is a truly inspired write. The opening grabbed me right away.

    "Take the thing inside your heart,
    the flicker that keeps you"

    Amazing all!

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  13. friends, thank you all so much for reading and for your kind words.
    this is a rough one, whew! glad it resonates. xoxo

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  14. A hand grenade of a poem and a message. What if it doesn't bleed...lol. You have a way with cutting straight to the bone with very little effort. A sort of a word ninja....if I might be so bold.

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  15. Excellent, as it blisters in the sun

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  16. oooooh now i have the violent femmes playing in my head. thank you!

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  17. Honestly, Marian, this might be my favorite thing you've ever written. A little bit Adrienne Rich in the way it directly instructs the reader? So gorgeous.

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    1. awww, thank you so much. i like how it came out, too. truthy and stuff.

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  18. Marian! felt this one 'oooof' in my diaphragm.
    the detonation. ... check that, the SELF-detonation that's demanded here is relentless and unforgiving. but the knowing that you'll bleed ever after, and lighting the fuse anyway. that's the living.

    i don't know why i keep writing around this same theme too...

    out of the park.

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    1. yeah, it's a theme i visit and revisit and visit again. thank you xoxo

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