Take the thing inside your heart,
the flicker that keeps you, add
a catalyst, and detonate. Feel
it burn, licking, conflagration
finally engulfing like cremation.
Tend the ashes and give it time.
A year later, see that blister?
If it bleeds, you're still alive.
5.24.2012
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WOWZERS, kiddo! This one is SMOKIN'!!! Just so good!
ReplyDeleteYou always blow me away.
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of terminology taken to the metaphoric level.
ReplyDeleteVisually perfect.
ReplyDeleteeden
Visceral and lyrical. Love it.
ReplyDeleteI love every word of this.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a quote from "Fried Green Tomatoes":
"A heart can be broken, but it still keeps beating just the same.
aw, Fried Green Tomatoes! xo
DeletePerfect! Visual and sensory. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteDamn. That just knocked me on my ass.
ReplyDeleteWell, that was a punch in the gut. In the best way.
ReplyDeleteNever heard the whole cycle expressed better, Marian.
ReplyDeleteStill alive is the main thing :) Fabulous, concise. Powerful.
ReplyDeleteoh wow. x
ReplyDeleteI agree with the above. This moved me. Are you a veteran?
ReplyDeletei am not a veteran.
Deletethanks so much for coming by, glad you liked it.
It bleeds, I am alive.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this. Really. Wish I could explain more why, but thanks!
i can imagine, Shanyn, a bit.
DeleteMarian, this is a truly inspired write. The opening grabbed me right away.
ReplyDelete"Take the thing inside your heart,
the flicker that keeps you"
Amazing all!
I love it ~
ReplyDeletefriends, thank you all so much for reading and for your kind words.
ReplyDeletethis is a rough one, whew! glad it resonates. xoxo
Wow!! Great piece!!
ReplyDeleteA hand grenade of a poem and a message. What if it doesn't bleed...lol. You have a way with cutting straight to the bone with very little effort. A sort of a word ninja....if I might be so bold.
ReplyDeleteword ninja? you flatterer. xo
DeleteExcellent, as it blisters in the sun
ReplyDeleteoooooh now i have the violent femmes playing in my head. thank you!
ReplyDeleteHonestly, Marian, this might be my favorite thing you've ever written. A little bit Adrienne Rich in the way it directly instructs the reader? So gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteawww, thank you so much. i like how it came out, too. truthy and stuff.
DeleteMarian! felt this one 'oooof' in my diaphragm.
ReplyDeletethe detonation. ... check that, the SELF-detonation that's demanded here is relentless and unforgiving. but the knowing that you'll bleed ever after, and lighting the fuse anyway. that's the living.
i don't know why i keep writing around this same theme too...
out of the park.
yeah, it's a theme i visit and revisit and visit again. thank you xoxo
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