4.13.2012

cherry tomatoes

After I met your mom
you reported that she
had pronounced me
effervescent:
that meant she approved.

We weren't like those
manly girls
she found confusing.

She embraced me,
fed me cherry tomatoes,
taught me how to prune
my peonies, like family.

Sometimes I miss her.

For Friday the 13th, Laurie Kolp challenged the Real Toads to write a thirteen-line poem using the word effervescence.

22 comments:

  1. oh Marian, just lovely. love those details about cherry tomatoes and pruning peonies! x

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  2. Oh this is a beauty! It is a wonderful thing to have someone else's Mom play a meaningful role in one's life - especially at certain crucial times, when their influence is so appreciated.

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  3. I love this! It's precious and beautiful and endearing. :)

    What a great compliment: "pronounced me effervescent"

    Wonderful details remembered: "fed me cherry tomatoes, taught me how to prune my peonies"

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  4. Thats a pretty big deal really for her to call you that. Keeping up the facade can be the hard part....lol. Bubble away buttercup....great write.

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  5. yep... i've always remembered it and have felt complimented by it.
    thank for reading, as always, friends.

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  6. I like how good memories can be salvaged from bad times.

    Great title. I wonder how you came up with that. So vivid.

    you write pretty

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  7. This is so touching, and sweet. I love that certain items, food, songs, phrases hold such meaning for each of us. Words are just so powerful.
    Thank you for sharing this!

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  8. :) effervescent is a funny label in a way, but I'd certainly rather that than some other things I've been called - a lovely poem with a touch of longing, I think (vintage Marian, I want to say)
    oh! & congratulations on having your book of poetry published! woohoo!!

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    1. thank you, ruth! exciting! and i like how that sounds: "vintage Marian"

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  9. Very unique... cool ending, Marian. Thanks for giving me the word!

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    1. thanks, Laurie. and you're welcome!
      i swear i did not have this in mind when i suggested it.
      but i'm glad that this came to mind :)

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  10. Such a (kind of) normal thing as eating cherry tomatoes and pruning means mom must really accept her- and like her! Good and vivid.

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