2.24.2012

cosmic

Your opposition is my complementary,
like earth and sky, spring and autumn
or even, if you like, heaven and hell.
You come from the tribe of a woman
with whom I have little in common
but who taught me to hold that rock
to my breast, the cactus flower musk
against my lips, until the words come.
Maybe you have learned that, too.
You arrived from I don't know where,
knocking on my poems, demanding an answer.
My door opened wide and I invited you in.
Come, let's spread out on your landscape,
watching the clouds, letting the words rain.

Kenia asked the Real Toads to write a poem that is a response to or a dialog with another poem, preferably another Toad's. This is my response to a poem by one of my favorite people, Cosmos Cami of The Cosmic Word Laboratory. Here is a link to Cami's poem:
Polar

12 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this. The ending two lines are really wonderfully inviting. Who could refuse!

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  2. Loved this part the most: "who taught me to hold that rock
    to my breast, the cactus flower musk
    against my lips, until the words come." so intimate and revelatory

    beautiful

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  3. Oh Marian, I read Polar and then your response....how lovely.....I, too, love the final lines so much..........also "knocking on my poems, demanding an answer". I love this prompt, am trying to find a half hour to do it myself.......SOOOOOOO behind, ack.

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  4. Oh wow.
    You MADE my day.
    Makes me want to cry, but tears are coming pretty easily of late.
    This was a great prompt. Helps that my poem was about you anyway.

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  5. Oh just out of the stratosphere brilliant. Everything I love about poetry - right here.

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  6. thank you, friends! a number of inspirations colliding here in the Cosmos. :)

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  7. A beautiful response! I also loved those last two lines, so much truth and power in them.

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  8. ...and all was right with the world... :)

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