2.07.2012

91S

Snaphot.
Full hunger moon
smiling,
shimmering seashell sky,
seven sisters stand sentry.
I fly by
on the highway.

9 comments:

  1. Highway and skyway perfectly juxtaposed.

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  2. Oh so beautiful.........LOVELY! Especially the "hunger moon" and "seashell sky". Wow, kiddo, you are GOOD!

    I beg you to go check out Fireblossom's haiku - totally hilarious.

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  3. local interest! "seven sisters" = mountain range.

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  4. Seven sisters=also a winter constellation!

    Love when you play with layers, my love.

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  5. ah... I hear the road calling in this one... sweet, sweet freedom and no one else on the highway

    love!

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  6. I'm not local, but I like the lyrical quality. This could be a song. A good one.

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  7. i have no idea how to write a song!

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