You can't overlook
the cyclical nature
of this thing,
the ebbs and surges
to which we have
grown accustomed.
If now we are high,
low's in the wings,
the invitation
of the modern world
unavoidable, like
a second act aria.
Delirium's a drug
we would sacrifice
quite a lot to keep,
but always, we wait
for the storied
other shoe to drop.
Magic is often
magnified, and I am
prone to hyperbole
in any event.
What are the chances
that this will stick?
1.30.2012
recidivism
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"the invitation
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unavoidable, like
a second act aria."
A siren song, for sure.
Magic is often
ReplyDeletemagnified, and I am
prone to hyperbole
in any event...
Each line is so finely-balanced, each word carefully selected. Just brilliant work, Marian.
What Kerry said. :-)
ReplyDeletethe final stanza was a clincher.very well crafted indeed.
ReplyDeleteI must agree with Kerry also... a brilliant piece!
ReplyDeleteFantastic, kiddo. One feels the "low's in the wings" and waiting for "the other shoe to drop".
ReplyDeleteExcellent job, really love the write, especially the notion of the second act aria, but not only the idea itself but how you have it in your second stanza is really neat, and the notion of the delirium as drug and how you followed that up. Exceptional work. Thanks
ReplyDeleteLife is a succession of highs and lows, I think!
ReplyDeleteOne never knows what is around the corner.
This works on different levels. So true. So real. So beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteI just love that final stanza, Marian, just love it!
ReplyDeleteK
Awesome job. Hyperbole and magic. Amen to the final stanza.
ReplyDeleteDelirium's a drug... now that's a poem in and of itself.
ReplyDeleteaaahhhhhh love is the drug. thank you, friends.
ReplyDeletesecond act aria!
ReplyDeleteThe cyclical nature of a relationship... very well said.
Wow I love the words you chose to guide us~
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!
I must agree with everyone that agreed with Kerry! Very well written and made me want to read more. Will definitely return to read more. Be blessed.
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aw, thanks, pals.
ReplyDeleteIf now we are high,
ReplyDeletelow's in the wings,
And all the worlds a stage, and men and women merely players, eh? LOL
oh, brilliant words indeed. :)
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