where
did you come
across all these years
click click
who sent you
to find a blue woman
riding the slippery rails
of wounded youth
click click
you are the antidote
to the low end of life
click click
here's my ticket
off peak one way
click.
11.19.2011
metro anywhere
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The click click reminds me of the roller coaster pulling up the first long rail, the final click at the top means the wild ride is about to begin - one way indeed.
ReplyDeleteah, interesting! okay, yep, that's about right.
ReplyDeletethis is inspired by the song prompt, & also by my novel-in-progress. yay!
How wonderful. I remember "riding the slippery rails of wounded youth" — sometimes as though it were yesterday, sometimes as if it happened to someone else.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
why is Berlin's Metro playing in my head as I read this?
ReplyDeleteTerri Nunn = awesome
Loved it, Marian
ooooh cool association, thank you, Lance!
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