9.27.2011

welcome wagon

the words opened in greeting
to the padfooting traveler,
weary-heeled, solace seeking--
the words opened in greeting.
why is peace so fleeting,
cleaved to heart's unraveler?
the words opened in greeting
for the padfooted traveler.

15 comments:

  1. What a hopeful piece for the lonely wayfarer!

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  2. A comforting triolet, if ever I saw one. Thanks.♥

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  3. I too love the hope in your poem. It is about the journey, but when we are weary, nice guiding light: hope~

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  4. i just have to say, i love knowing how people read my words.
    wowee.

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  5. Oh my goodness, this is WONDERFUL. I so love it, words and form. Perfection!

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  6. aw. i don't know about THAT, but thank you, sherry.

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  7. Hello.
    "weary-heeled, solace seeking" sounds like me after the last few weeks I've had.

    Nicely done!

    Thanks for sharing & for the kind words on Thief In The Night

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  8. What a great triolet! I like your choice of words!

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  9. I picked up on the line Andy commented on: "weary-heeled, solace seeking". I like the musicality of it.

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  10. thank you, lovely people. love love.

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