9.15.2011

(we never discussed it)

heat del sol
accio mushrooms
harmonic convergence
souls meld

look at them!
wings to fly!
they know how to travel.
(take us.)

6 comments:

  1. thank you, wise old one.
    this little poem was actually inspired by a documentary i watched about comedian Bill Hicks, who died in the early 90's. I believe it's called American.

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  2. From my reading of this piece, I would have to say that the two stanzas kind of work separately: the first seems very earth-bound, with the reference to mushrooms, and the heat of the sun; but the second is all about the sky, the way to heaven, the vision of something that passes out of sight beyond the clouds. I love the last parenthetical statement, which left me with the taste of longing in my mouth.

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