9.10.2011

privacy

what if my eyes were windows?
would you trick me
into throwing open my sash
so you could have a clear view
of my thoughts and wants?
you may as well try your mirror.

17 comments:

  1. Oooh revealing Very clever view

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  2. Voyeuristic. But it's a good read.

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  3. ahhh how adorable! It's a super cute poem. Kiss you. <3

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  4. Wow! This is an incredible little insight and a most entertaining read this morning. I've come back to it a few times and it still sings. Beautiful!

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  5. It could work well as a retort. :) It made me smile. Thanks for the poem.

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  6. beautiful and thoughtful too. loved the last line, kind of like coming back in full circle.

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  7. Haha! Always the little sting in the tail.

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  8. window eyes,
    and is it true then that we all see what we want to see? or that down behind the shades we all think and want the same things...
    thoughtfully coy, and thoroughly enjoyable.

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  9. Clever, to question a questioner...

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