9.10.2011

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what if my eyes were windows?
would you trick me
into throwing open my sash
so you could have a clear view
of my thoughts and wants?
you may as well try your mirror.
Posted by Marian at 8:37 PM
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17 comments:

  1. EllaSeptember 10, 2011 at 10:08 PM

    Oooh revealing Very clever view

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  2. madhumakhiSeptember 11, 2011 at 3:40 AM

    Voyeuristic. But it's a good read.

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  3. Kenia SantosSeptember 11, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    ahhh how adorable! It's a super cute poem. Kiss you. <3

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  4. PhotoDictionSeptember 11, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Wow! This is an incredible little insight and a most entertaining read this morning. I've come back to it a few times and it still sings. Beautiful!

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  5. RavenblackSeptember 11, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    It could work well as a retort. :) It made me smile. Thanks for the poem.

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  6. RashmiSeptember 11, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    Wonderful poem.........

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    beautiful and thoughtful too. loved the last line, kind of like coming back in full circle.

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  8. Kerry O'ConnorSeptember 11, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    Haha! Always the little sting in the tail.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    window eyes,
    and is it true then that we all see what we want to see? or that down behind the shades we all think and want the same things...
    thoughtfully coy, and thoroughly enjoyable.

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  10. Chronicles of IllusionsSeptember 11, 2011 at 8:35 PM

    Oh I love that - wonderful

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Six very potent lines. Thank you.

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  12. JinksySeptember 12, 2011 at 5:21 AM

    Clever, to question a questioner...

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  13. CameronSeptember 12, 2011 at 6:39 AM

    what a mirror.

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  14. MarySeptember 12, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Clever twist at the end.

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  15. Brother OllieSeptember 12, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    this is a twist...a cool one.

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  16. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 3:43 PM

    ah, love!

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  17. MarianOctober 20, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    :) yes.

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