9.23.2011

loup rouge

you bit off tails
& ate my trail crumbs,
chased me down corridors,
up endless stairs,
cornered me at the crucible
where i learned to defend,
bracingly.

17 comments:

  1. This red wolf frightens, save for the upturn at "bracingly."

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  2. Sont les mots qui vont tres bien ensemble.

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  3. That's a turn up for the books. A good defense can be better than a random offensive after all.

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  4. aw, thanks. watch out for that guy.

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  5. Ahhh so clever! You have a way with brevity! Great post.

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  6. A red, a dangerous hunter trailing its prey! Tense!

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  7. powerful.
    love the verbs your use.

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