you bit off tails
& ate my trail crumbs,
chased me down corridors,
up endless stairs,
cornered me at the crucible
where i learned to defend,
bracingly.
9.23.2011
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you bit off tails
& ate my trail crumbs,
chased me down corridors,
up endless stairs,
cornered me at the crucible
where i learned to defend,
bracingly.
This red wolf frightens, save for the upturn at "bracingly."
ReplyDeleteSont les mots qui vont tres bien ensemble.
ReplyDeleteThat's a turn up for the books. A good defense can be better than a random offensive after all.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteClever and vivid image!
ReplyDeleteGood one, Marian!
ReplyDeleteOh how I love the wolf!
ReplyDeleteinteresting
ReplyDeleteClever!
ReplyDeleteaw, thanks. watch out for that guy.
ReplyDeleteAhhh so clever! You have a way with brevity! Great post.
ReplyDeletethank you :)
ReplyDeleteA red, a dangerous hunter trailing its prey! Tense!
ReplyDeleteRed Wolf - that is bad.
ReplyDeleteI feel chased; well done
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletelove the verbs your use.
ah, thanks.
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