9.23.2011

loup rouge

you bit off tails
& ate my trail crumbs,
chased me down corridors,
up endless stairs,
cornered me at the crucible
where i learned to defend,
bracingly.
Posted by Marian at 1:58 PM
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17 comments:

  1. CDGSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    This red wolf frightens, save for the upturn at "bracingly."

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Sont les mots qui vont tres bien ensemble.

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  3. Kerry O'ConnorSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:59 PM

    That's a turn up for the books. A good defense can be better than a random offensive after all.

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  4. Mystic_MomSeptember 24, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Nicely done!

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  5. WyomingDivaSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    Clever and vivid image!

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  6. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 25, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    Good one, Marian!

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  7. Old RavenSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    Oh how I love the wolf!

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  8. Jo BryantSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    interesting

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  9. MarySeptember 25, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    Clever!

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  10. MarianSeptember 26, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    aw, thanks. watch out for that guy.

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Ahhh so clever! You have a way with brevity! Great post.

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  12. MarianSeptember 27, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    thank you :)

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  13. Gemma WisemanSeptember 30, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    A red, a dangerous hunter trailing its prey! Tense!

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  14. Old OllieSeptember 30, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Red Wolf - that is bad.

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  15. EllaSeptember 30, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    I feel chased; well done

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  16. MorningOctober 1, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    powerful.
    love the verbs your use.

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  17. MarianOctober 1, 2011 at 3:57 PM

    ah, thanks.

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