"days of our lives,"
you said, don't fear what joy you bring
days of our lives.
love you who are & fly so high--
what would have been if you had seen
yourself through our eyes, no flinching?
days of our lives.
9.05.2011
for freddie
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One of the greatest things I have ever learnt:
ReplyDeleteYou learn to love yourself when you can see yourself through the eyes of someone who loves you.
what would i have been? profound thought tucked into the days of our lives. quite punchy.
ReplyDeleteWonderful self-analytical rondelet!
ReplyDeleteOh, I love this one. So many times our outsides and insides don't match.
ReplyDelete..what would have been if you had seen
ReplyDeleteyourself through our eyes, no flinching?...
BRILLIANT!
thanks, pals. it's for freddie mercury, in case that isn't obvious.
ReplyDeleteSmiling at the memory of Freddie Mercury. A man that gave it all. I liked your rondelet. I agree with Kim. Brilliant
ReplyDeletethank you.
ReplyDeletei was trying to say here, what if he actually was completely & totally unrestrained? imagine THAT.
aw. this gave me goosebumps
ReplyDeleteaw.
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