9.05.2011

for freddie

"days of our lives,"
you said, don't fear what joy you bring
days of our lives.
love you who are & fly so high--
what would have been if you had seen
yourself through our eyes, no flinching?
days of our lives.
Posted by Marian at 1:28 PM
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10 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:03 PM

    One of the greatest things I have ever learnt:

    You learn to love yourself when you can see yourself through the eyes of someone who loves you.

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  2. Ed PilollaSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    what would i have been? profound thought tucked into the days of our lives. quite punchy.

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  3. Old RavenSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    Wonderful self-analytical rondelet!

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  4. laurie kolpSeptember 5, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    Oh, I love this one. So many times our outsides and insides don't match.

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  5. Kim NelsonSeptember 5, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    ..what would have been if you had seen
    yourself through our eyes, no flinching?...
    BRILLIANT!

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  6. MarianSeptember 5, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    thanks, pals. it's for freddie mercury, in case that isn't obvious.

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  7. California Ink in MotionSeptember 5, 2011 at 8:42 PM

    Smiling at the memory of Freddie Mercury. A man that gave it all. I liked your rondelet. I agree with Kim. Brilliant

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  8. MarianSeptember 6, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    thank you.
    i was trying to say here, what if he actually was completely & totally unrestrained? imagine THAT.

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  9. alyssaSeptember 7, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    aw. this gave me goosebumps

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  10. MarianSeptember 8, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    aw.

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