9.19.2011

fatigue

plans for writing,
tumbling, playing,
loving in autumn air
gone awry
as all my body wants
is to sleep,
all my head wants
is to stop,
all my heart wants
is to be quiet.
Posted by Marian at 9:57 AM
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26 comments:

  1. California Ink in MotionSeptember 19, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    You have just described my sentiments exactly! and thank you for visiting me. I am always in awe when I read your poems.

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  2. IndigoSeptember 19, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    I came off a summer sojourn that went just as you decribed. Here's to hoping autumn may yet welcome us with open arms. (Hugs)Indigo

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    Those autumn days creep in, sending us to hibernation. This is wonderfully done

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  4. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 19, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Me, too, but hi ho, hi ho, out the door I go to a GRISLY cleaning job. Argh.

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  5. Miss ash tuesdaySeptember 19, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    Are you in my head?

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    Beautiful thoughts
    Cami

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  7. MarianSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    apparently i am not the only one with autumn disaffective disorder!

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  8. LanceSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    yeah, me too...I mean heck, I wrote about cheerleading before Helene or robots

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  9. laurie kolpSeptember 19, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    lol...We're still battling heat in Tx...

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  10. Kerry O'ConnorSeptember 19, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    Sometimes the mind is willing but the body calls Time Out.

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    very nice M

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  12. MarianSeptember 19, 2011 at 1:26 PM

    seriously, people, sometimes the teensiest of poems strikes a nerve!

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    Describes nicely how I feel with the approach of autumn...

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  14. JinksySeptember 19, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Some days we need to recoup energies...♥

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  15. Kim NelsonSeptember 19, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    You've beautifully and melodically explained my last few weeks. I much prefer your description to mine! :-)

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2011 at 4:56 PM

    i fight with my body so much.
    it's bound to catch up with me sooner or later..
    i always think i can come to stop, and have quiet even as i rush around and work at fevered pitch.
    that's probably right madness.

    i call time out :)

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  17. MarianSeptember 19, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    yes, time out!

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  18. MarySeptember 19, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    I empathize! I am not one to take naps really, but yesterday I wanted (and took) a nap. It was delightful. I think we must be like bears waiting to hibernate or something.

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  19. ShonEjaiSeptember 19, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    Well done!

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  20. Kay L. DaviesSeptember 20, 2011 at 1:58 AM

    Yesterday I slept until 11:15am.
    I think it's the moon, or the stars, or the planets. Something is conspiring against all of us, it just has to be. How else to explain it? :o)
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  21. Kenia CrisSeptember 20, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    I know the feeling. I've been sleeping a lot these day when I really wanted to write more, to see more of my friends, to read more poetry. Is it laziness???

    Love,
    K. <3

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  22. MarianSeptember 20, 2011 at 9:25 AM

    wah!

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  23. CarlSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    I really like this piece. I can identify with feelings or it inspires feelings in me that are powerful, insightful pieces of analysis that are not happy.

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  24. MarianSeptember 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    yes. not particularly happy, this one.

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  25. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    Hmm... very glad I don't get that way until November-ish. I feel for ya,...

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  26. MarianOctober 20, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    comes & goes, it does. xo

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