9.06.2011

be careful what you wish for

oh if only i
could be happy as a clam?
prolly be juiced. damn.

Bad Poetry for Real Toads.

20 comments:

  1. hahahaha!!

    Damn! You turned a cliche on its head. Tee hee

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  2. prolly? PROLLY!?!?!?!?!!! YOU'RE FORTY FUCKIN' FIVE YEARS OLD FOR FUCKS SAKE!!!

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  3. yes

    and ending anything with damn always works.

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  4. husband? you have missed the point entirely.
    which was to write a bad poem.
    so i used your least-favorite "word." in my exercise in writing a BAD POEM.
    see? i am always thinking of you. hee hee.

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  5. if it is a bad poem contest, then you could prolly get first place.

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  6. good, then i did a good job with this exercise.
    and you should prolly stop giving me a hard time now.

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  7. tee hee... prolly.
    maybe i'll write mine in text lingo... :)

    i think the rule is that you now have to put the prefix 'lil before your name.

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  8. Wicked sense of humour has prolly been responsible for this gem...LOL

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  9. Love this! especially 'prolly':-)

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  10. hee! thank you for your endorsement, people. LOL as they say.
    love, lil mar :)

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  11. Hilarious. And your husband took you seriously. So did mine. "Good poem," he said, prolly because he saw himself as starring in it. He looks at life that way (hmm, good line for a song).
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  12. Prolly the best of a bad bunch! Well done.

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  13. Short and not very sweet at all. Brilliantly bad.

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  14. thanks, folks. i think i will be pleased when people stop reading this one.

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  15. best bad haiku evar. EVAR. prolly.

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