8.15.2011

on the binge

driving down like rain
torrents whipping mad
wasted wistful wonder
& what to think?
melancholia like vermin
regret like a cerement
better to be pelted
than to pretend.

10 comments:

  1. You have such a way of gripping the reader by the throat until the very last words... and then some.

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  2. and then what? throttling my readers?
    so much don't mean to do that :)

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  3. leaving them gasping for breath, at the very least...

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  4. Very nice! I enjoyed this greatly!

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  5. This is intense, fantastically focused, excellent read.

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  6. hah, thanks.
    now get in out of the downpour!

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  7. "wasted wistful wonder"

    what wonderfully wrought words!

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