8.15.2011

on the binge

driving down like rain
torrents whipping mad
wasted wistful wonder
& what to think?
melancholia like vermin
regret like a cerement
better to be pelted
than to pretend.
Posted by Marian at 11:43 AM
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10 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 15, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    You have such a way of gripping the reader by the throat until the very last words... and then some.

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  2. MarianAugust 15, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    and then what? throttling my readers?
    so much don't mean to do that :)

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  3. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 15, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    leaving them gasping for breath, at the very least...

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  4. MarianAugust 15, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    ah, breathe!

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  5. AnonymousAugust 15, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    Very nice! I enjoyed this greatly!

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  6. TiadenAugust 15, 2011 at 2:14 PM

    This is intense, fantastically focused, excellent read.

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  7. MarianAugust 15, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    hah, thanks.
    now get in out of the downpour!

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  8. AnonymousAugust 15, 2011 at 10:05 PM

    "wasted wistful wonder"

    what wonderfully wrought words!

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  9. Mad KaneAugust 16, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    Very intense and well done.

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  10. MarianAugust 16, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    thanks, pals.

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