7.07.2011

looking glass

glossy moonlight hate
water swirls crimson, scars picked
off in nasty sheets
cream-swaddled wretched cringing
but your call: hey, beautiful.

7 comments:

  1. Very telling, this one. Love the rescue at the end.

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  2. Can I just echo Bubba here.
    Beautiful wording.

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  3. thank you! (scratch, scratch)

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  4. Such a vision of pain, and the turn around in the last line... the saving grace of a beloved voice from nightmare imaginings.

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  5. It's been decided: you can write...

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  6. hah! thank you. telling it like i see it, as they say.

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