7.07.2011

kavalier

your words go down sideways;
i teeter on your teeth
heady & akilter
swallowing your lines whole,
addicted & wanting.

(Dedicated to Michael Chabon.)

9 comments:

  1. i love your beat style! so nice

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  2. Gotta admire a perfectly written pieceGotta admire a perfectly written piece

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  3. Marian,

    You have demonstrated the importance of every word!!!

    Eileen

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  4. You've said it all in a few scant lines. Wow!

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  5. Hmm,... this one's been on my list of books to read for some time now. Guess I'd better buckle down and read the thing if it's that good. :)

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  6. very, very special!
    i like all of his writing but Kavalier & Clay is beyond great.

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  7. I love the short and sweet of it, so well expressed~
    Great Job

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  8. thank you, Ella!
    now give me some words to munch on.

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