7.25.2011

how that feels

like a ripe orchid:
inside out, trembling open,
utterly exposed.

8 comments:

  1. sensual
    hard
    painful
    so much said in so few words, who wouldn't love haiku

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  2. interestingly, this haiku itself makes me feel exposed. huh.

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  3. you know how i feel about haiku,

    but,

    this is a good one.

    all the proper elements besides just syllable count. nature, emotion. perfect.

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  4. thank you, mike.
    though i'd argue that none of my haiku are merely about syllable count :)

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  5. ...well of course i'd never imply such....

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