6.02.2011

ridiculous

you can walk out now
but you'll be missing out on
the very best part.

7 comments:

  1. that is often true...I'll stick around

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  2. right, why risk missing the pivotal game-changing scene?
    shortsighted if you ask me.

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  3. Love it, Marian! Anybody who walks away that easily, doesn't deserve the very best...LOL!

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  4. Oh, I liked this! If you have to say this to someone, then they're the type who won't get it,and will walk out anyway. The wonder they will miss though, if they only knew! Ahhhh... the best part though, that will be reserved for the one who knows it's the best, even before you realize it. :-)
    Beautifully done, thank you!

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  5. aw, roughwaterjohn... love your comment.
    also, love when the comments are way, way longer than the poem. giggle!
    thanks for reading!

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