5.20.2011

what if we said what now?

i say let's hike the hills
to that mountain stream
let the rushing cool us
before tromping on
we'll bring back
fiddleheads
fry em up with olive oil
crusty bread
some good pinot noir
watch the stars come out
on the back porch.
don't forget your camera.

8 comments:

  1. thanks to Dan Simmons for helping me see the poem inside the other thing.

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  2. Wheels within wheels in a spiral array
    A pattern so grand and complex
    Time after time we lose sight of the way
    Our causes can't see their effects

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  3. totally true.
    good thing i have smartypants friends.

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  4. It's tighter now. Yes.

    I love watching a revision. Does that make me a voyeur or a weirdo?

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  5. dan, like it, love it even!
    cdg, we already know you are a weirdo.

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  6. reads about like the best day ever.

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