5.19.2011

plan B

look the other way
take a deeper breath
bathe my woe in rosemary
pretend it never happened.

16 comments:

  1. "bathe my woe in rosemary"

    another one line poem.

    Good afternoon, my love!

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  2. you are encouraging me to be EVEN MORE sparse in my writing than i already am.
    really? too verbose up in here?
    xoxo to you too!

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  3. Sometimes the best stuff is the briefest, summarizing a single thought/feeling/emotion into a crystalline instance.

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  4. This is a little sad but just lovely! <3

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  5. oh but you make it so hard to look away...love the rosemary reference...

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  6. Lovely short poem bursting at the seams with meaning. If I were given each of the four lines as choices I'd take the middle two!

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  7. Sad... I like the Rosemary reference ....

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  8. Rosemary for marriage, rosemary for a funeral... yes, there is something very melancholy about this poem.

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  9. Short yet powerful. My type of poem.

    :)
    Kelly
    http://simplydeeppoetry.blogspot.com

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  10. So much in so little! Wonderful!

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