4.12.2011

royal anthem

words
floaty chanty
like the ocean

spring sun
like sea foam
washing over me

in every quiet moment
i return to my head

in your lap

your fingers twined in my hair.
Posted by Marian at 6:51 PM
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22 comments:

  1. Aww... you sweet thing.

    We'll get back there soon. Promise.

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  2. oh, also?
    I just got the title.
    bit thick, me.
    love you!

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  5. like the ocean …
    like the sun …
    like the scent of spring …
    timeless words, made unique with your thoughtful talent.

    This is

    L
    O
    V
    E

    in its purest, most untainted form ;D
    LOVE IT

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  6. Something nice about resting a head on a lap, a bit of lingering childhood love there, I think.

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  7. i can hardly look at this :)

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  8. a nice moment in time! I like, the formatting, the wording, just amazing, nice work!
    https://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/hola-lola-a-next-story/

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  9. Can be read as sweet and maternal or as sensual, too. Nice!

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  10. love the imagery.

    fingers twined in my hair,
    wow.

    I feel it.
    A++

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  11. Twined is a marvelous word right there. This is a good piece.

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  12. Brings back memories of childhood and safety, thought it could be read more than one way. Nice! Very nice ... Thank you for a quality contribution to Potluck.

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  13. thank you, friends.
    it is so easy to write loveliness when you have a lovely subject.

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  15. :) i wish i could live there.

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  18. love the last line.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  19. I could feel it. Beautiful~!

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  21. Fantastic image this brings to mind - great write

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