4.12.2011

royal anthem

words
floaty chanty
like the ocean

spring sun
like sea foam
washing over me

in every quiet moment
i return to my head

in your lap

your fingers twined in my hair.
Posted by Marian at 6:51 PM
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22 comments:

  1. CDG @ Move Over Mary Poppins!April 12, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    Aww... you sweet thing.

    We'll get back there soon. Promise.

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  2. CDG @ Move Over Mary Poppins!April 12, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    oh, also?
    I just got the title.
    bit thick, me.
    love you!

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  3. MarianApril 12, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    (xo)

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  4. ianApril 13, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    aw.

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  5. ImaginationApril 13, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    like the ocean …
    like the sun …
    like the scent of spring …
    timeless words, made unique with your thoughtful talent.

    This is

    L
    O
    V
    E

    in its purest, most untainted form ;D
    LOVE IT

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  6. BubbaApril 13, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Something nice about resting a head on a lap, a bit of lingering childhood love there, I think.

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  7. MarianApril 13, 2011 at 7:43 AM

    i can hardly look at this :)

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  8. AnonymousApril 17, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    a nice moment in time! I like, the formatting, the wording, just amazing, nice work!
    https://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/16/hola-lola-a-next-story/

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  9. Danielle FilasApril 17, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    Can be read as sweet and maternal or as sensual, too. Nice!

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Brin KorbetisApril 17, 2011 at 11:10 PM

    love the imagery.

    fingers twined in my hair,
    wow.

    I feel it.
    A++

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  11. CarlApril 17, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    Twined is a marvelous word right there. This is a good piece.

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  12. JamieDedesApril 18, 2011 at 12:18 AM

    Brings back memories of childhood and safety, thought it could be read more than one way. Nice! Very nice ... Thank you for a quality contribution to Potluck.

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  13. MarianApril 18, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    thank you, friends.
    it is so easy to write loveliness when you have a lovely subject.

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  14. AnonymousApril 18, 2011 at 10:21 AM

    speechless...I'm at peace :)

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  15. MarianApril 18, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    :) i wish i could live there.

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  16. MiaApril 18, 2011 at 3:55 PM

    mmm...nice. :)


    Luna

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  17. MarianApril 18, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    definitely.

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  18. AnonymousApril 19, 2011 at 3:06 AM

    love the last line.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  19. KayApril 19, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    I could feel it. Beautiful~!

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  20. MarianApril 19, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    twiny goodness :)
    thank you.

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  21. AnonymousApril 19, 2011 at 9:30 PM

    Fantastic image this brings to mind - great write

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  22. MarianApril 20, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    thank you :)

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