4.06.2011

"prose"

lolling around
on my tongue
trying to form a word
and escape my lips
  pleasing you, i hope.

11 comments:

  1. (how wonderfully apt that this little ditty is my six-hundredth post)
    (at least i am pleasing myself over here)

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  3. Suffice it to say that my initial reaction needed deleting.

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  4. Six hundred? Wow!
    And a delightful little ditty it is, too!

    (I've allways liked the term "little ditty")

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  5. yea, ditties are the shit.
    look at this glorious delicious nugget.
    love you...
    "trying to form a word
    and escape my lips"
    so good!!

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  6. amazing the way you can please someone so very quickly with your eagerly expressed words...fun to read...great prose...

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  7. Usualy "lolling" is a body thing! But when the image focuses just on the tongue, then all manner of cavorting body parts seem to join in for a bit of the action! (Should I delete that? hmmmm But it's leading somewhere I think!) Somehow it all highlights how much physical energy focus goes into shaping the words that please!

    An interesting poem!

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  8. ah hee, gemma. only the really nutty ones self-censor themselves around here. you are doing just fine and xo to you.

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