4.22.2011

"one inch tall"

whisper the green dream
write the true sweet rain tonight
i love you, friend. dance.

(This haiku is in response to Brian Miller's Friday Poetically at One Stop Poetry, in the spirit of Shel Silverstein's One Inch Tall.)
Posted by Marian at 9:11 AM
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14 comments:

  1. BubbaApril 22, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Sweet like grass.

    (I'm still working on mine)

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  2. MarianApril 22, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    love this exercise!

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  3. Kerry O'ConnorApril 22, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    Such a lyrical response to the challenge. I love the second line most of all.

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  4. MarianApril 22, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    i like it, too. did you do it, kerry? going to look.
    xo

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  5. LolamouseApril 22, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    so sweet and innocent. lovely.

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  6. Brian MillerApril 22, 2011 at 1:25 PM

    dancing on...i like this...and dacing is a great response to being loved...

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  7. LouiseApril 22, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    A really nice haiku ~ great response to the prompt! : )

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  8. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    truly lovely... :)

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  9. MarianApril 22, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    aw, shucks. shel silverstein's words!
    but kinda similar to the day in day out words around here, huh?

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  10. UnknownApril 22, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    A haiku, that was a great idea. Nice poem, "whisper a green dream"... works for earth day too.

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  11. ayalaApril 22, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    Nice and lovely!

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  12. MarianApril 22, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    yes, nice and lovely for earth day, for sure.

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  13. KatApril 23, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Love the imagery!

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  14. MarianApril 23, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    thanks, kat!

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