4.22.2011

"one inch tall"

whisper the green dream
write the true sweet rain tonight
i love you, friend. dance.

(This haiku is in response to Brian Miller's Friday Poetically at One Stop Poetry, in the spirit of Shel Silverstein's One Inch Tall.)
Posted by Marian at 9:11 AM
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14 comments:

  1. Sweet like grass.

    (I'm still working on mine)

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  3. Such a lyrical response to the challenge. I love the second line most of all.

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  4. i like it, too. did you do it, kerry? going to look.
    xo

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  6. dancing on...i like this...and dacing is a great response to being loved...

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  7. A really nice haiku ~ great response to the prompt! : )

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  8. truly lovely... :)

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  9. aw, shucks. shel silverstein's words!
    but kinda similar to the day in day out words around here, huh?

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  10. A haiku, that was a great idea. Nice poem, "whisper a green dream"... works for earth day too.

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  12. yes, nice and lovely for earth day, for sure.

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