4.22.2011

"one inch tall"

whisper the green dream
write the true sweet rain tonight
i love you, friend. dance.

(This haiku is in response to Brian Miller's Friday Poetically at One Stop Poetry, in the spirit of Shel Silverstein's One Inch Tall.)

14 comments:

  1. Sweet like grass.

    (I'm still working on mine)

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  2. Such a lyrical response to the challenge. I love the second line most of all.

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  3. i like it, too. did you do it, kerry? going to look.
    xo

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  4. dancing on...i like this...and dacing is a great response to being loved...

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  5. A really nice haiku ~ great response to the prompt! : )

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  6. aw, shucks. shel silverstein's words!
    but kinda similar to the day in day out words around here, huh?

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  7. A haiku, that was a great idea. Nice poem, "whisper a green dream"... works for earth day too.

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  8. yes, nice and lovely for earth day, for sure.

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