4.02.2011

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don't
  close your eyes

      focus now

  in the next moment
          
               i may be
                   on the wind.

12 comments:

  1. "I may be on the wind" is a great phrase. Solid poem...

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  2. Love wind analogies.

    http://simplydeeppooetry.blogspot.com/

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  3. pull your finger?

    sorry...i couldn't help it :)

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  4. I love this.
    it has many meanings...

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  5. This is really pretty and soulful

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  6. Love the brevity in your work - and the impact each piece has. Very nice.

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  7. The best magicians do it right before your eyes.

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  8. Very nice. I see me and my daughters in every poem of yours I read.

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  9. so nice to hear! clearly we should be pals :)

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