aw, man
what's the plan
are you nowhere
noway
nohow
and what
aw, shucks
what the fuck
a ways away
you okay
a whole nother
place to stay
you
the real deal
gonna steal
what's real
i can feel
you now
oh
yeah baby
i can
sure as hell
feel you now
oh yes i can feel you now.
holy crap! you wrote a lot, today!
ReplyDeletethis one's a saucy one, eh? i particularly enjoy the use of the word "fuck" in the rhyme scheme.
Great rhythm to this one, Marian! Love it!
ReplyDeleteaw, shucks, i guess it does rhyme.
ReplyDeletei hear a rhyme, for sure, but in different places.
ReplyDeletelike way away across the universe?
ReplyDeleteI love "a whole nother." I say that all the time.
ReplyDeletei know, sister! right?
ReplyDeleteit's one of those things i would actively try to lose from my speaking but for how adorable it is.
it might the the only thing like that.
been reading this again and again all day.
ReplyDeleteI love it.
my favorite of the new ones...
you just like it when i use the word fuck. ;)
ReplyDeleteA fantastic read; therefore, a fantastic write.
ReplyDeletehell yeah! hee.
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