3.18.2011

tenant rights

if you
worry that i
cannot feel you, stop. you
have taken up residence here,
squatter.

14 comments:

  1. I cant help it.
    I like it here.

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  2. are you saying i'm cheap? for crying out loud.

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  3. not cheap, but a big bang for the buck.

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  4. i am gonna take that as a compliment and start writing about babies and kittycats again :)

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  5. How on earth do you make the word squatter sound sexy?

    Jesus.

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  6. Brief and direct, this piece expresses an unusual impatient reassurance. Evocative of emotion.

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  7. thank you, kim! big and restrained, right?
    cdg. squatter is one of my favorite words!

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  8. Didn't realise you wrote cinquain! I LOVE cinquain!

    Zee

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  9. ooohh let's talk cinquain! yum!

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