3.20.2011

homework

you asked if i feel free

i said i feel free
                   sometimes

you asked
when do i feel free?

i said when i write
                    and when i fly

which is when?

14 comments:

  1. homework eh?
    i bet you're the teacher's pet!

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  2. for future reference, i like pink ladies.

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  3. I LOVE YOU IN ALL CAPS KIM NELSON!

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  4. I think all of us reading your words are the ones who are flying here.

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  5. oh i know you do. this isn't so weird, though!

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  6. Is there a literal term for displaced words in a poem? Or are we just going to call it weird placement?

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  7. what do i know? that's what nicole says.

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