3.17.2011

even green girl gets the blues

you expect
sex and sunshine
but if you followed
you might find me
drunk and twitching
in the swirlum of doom.

13 comments:

  1. That's when I would shoot my laser to dispel that swirling doom and rescue you. :)

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  2. the other day my son said that someone was "down in the swirlum of doom"
    and i was so charmed by the phrase that i didn't ask him what the hell he was talking about.
    i would guess pokemon.
    i love writing from the crazy things my kids say. i'm working on another one now.

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  3. ah but if it really happens, you can rescue me, eric alder.

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  4. I've got a Pok├Ęball ready! (LOL!)

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  5. can we go 5 mins without discussing wide eyed cartoons I dont know?
    Im grumpy.

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  6. Oh Evelyn! Such a drama queen!

    You're a regular Officer Jenny!

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  7. i don't think i have ever discussed pokemon with you!
    and i can't actually carry on a conversation about it anyway.
    sorry you are grumpy.

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  8. "blue in green" is a great song. swrilum is a fun collection of sounds. this is a sad poem; good, but sad. do you need some floaties?

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  9. from time to time. you bringing yours over?

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  10. hmmm, i don't have any floaties; but if you provide them, i gots plenty of hot air to fill them with ;)

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  11. i am not even gonna start making jokes about blowing things.

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