3.19.2011

delirium

you came
levitating above me
laughing and twinkling
reaching out
pulling me to you
through my haze
bringing me back to life
in the next moment
i'll see you elsewhere
so come and cross over
tonight
and then please
if you would
tuck me back in.

19 comments:

  1. really, really nice of you to say. thank you!

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  2. "levitating above me
    laughing and twinkling"
    favorite part.
    it feels like floating

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  3. levitating, floating, flying, kinda predictable, to tell the truth.

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  4. no, its not.
    the "tuck me back in" part at the end
    changes it all up for me.
    sincerely.

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  5. what drugs were you on when you wrote this? where can i get some?

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  6. lucky for you, i am a sharer. i am all addicted.

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  7. This speaks of longing and loss and is both sensual and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it.

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  8. Loved it, especially "tuck me back in". Good one!

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  9. if you gotta land, at least you should be warmly tucked.

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  10. This was fun to read of the entity that lets you fly with it and then will tuck you in (hopefully). Dream like.

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  11. What a lovely feeling. What a lovely poem. What a lovely place, all tucked in, satisfied and warm.

    So very nice!

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  12. A solid request - really enjoyed this piece.

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  13. ask for what you want. even when delirious.

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  14. Sometimes we're at our most honest in the depths of delirium. Very nice feeling here.

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  15. Vivid, and a little scary. I like the way you write.

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  16. thanks! and i like a good juice box now and then.

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