you came
levitating above me
laughing and twinkling
reaching out
pulling me to you
through my haze
bringing me back to life
in the next moment
i'll see you elsewhere
so come and cross over
tonight
and then please
if you would
tuck me back in.
3.19.2011
delirium
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Really, really good!
ReplyDeletereally, really nice of you to say. thank you!
ReplyDelete"levitating above me
ReplyDeletelaughing and twinkling"
favorite part.
it feels like floating
levitating, floating, flying, kinda predictable, to tell the truth.
ReplyDeleteno, its not.
ReplyDeletethe "tuck me back in" part at the end
changes it all up for me.
sincerely.
what drugs were you on when you wrote this? where can i get some?
ReplyDeletelucky for you, i am a sharer. i am all addicted.
ReplyDeleteThis speaks of longing and loss and is both sensual and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteLoved it, especially "tuck me back in". Good one!
ReplyDeleteif you gotta land, at least you should be warmly tucked.
ReplyDeleteThis was fun to read of the entity that lets you fly with it and then will tuck you in (hopefully). Dream like.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely feeling. What a lovely poem. What a lovely place, all tucked in, satisfied and warm.
ReplyDeleteSo very nice!
:)
ReplyDeletevery lovely.
ReplyDeleteA solid request - really enjoyed this piece.
ReplyDeleteask for what you want. even when delirious.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we're at our most honest in the depths of delirium. Very nice feeling here.
ReplyDeleteVivid, and a little scary. I like the way you write.
ReplyDeletethanks! and i like a good juice box now and then.
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